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conversations with rabbis by ~avivah:iconavivah:



sitting behind wall-mounted degrees
in an air-conditioned office,
you seem almost human

you are not bathed in a spiritual glow
standing on the bimah
guttural Hebrew chants escaping your lips
head bowed in prayer

no, you sit before me
with wrinkles and sunspots
and tired eyes
and you look less sacred than before

I tell you why I haven't stepped
inside the sanctuary in a year
you seem to understand

you call my newfound agnosticism
a mature
thoughtful decision,
and here am I

without the heart to confess
that it's a choice based
on my adolescent unwillingness
to surrender my friday nights
©2008-2010 ~avivah
:iconavivah:

Author's Comments

my life is so awkward.

[written very quickly haha]

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:iconvampire-freak666:
hmmmm...made me think about what it could mean, still not quite sure though. Other than a slight confusion, it is very good.

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Pssst! I have something to tell you.......AWW CRAP! I FORGOT!
:iconavivah:
thanks i guess ?

(it's just about not wanting to tell my rabbi that the reason i haven't been to temple in a long time is because I go out with my friends instead)

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"Dying is an art, like everything else. I do it exceptionally well." -- sylvia plath
:iconlust-for-love:
LOL
it made me laugh
that's so sarah of you

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"there are people who believe that a picture captures the soul. for them this is a terrible thing. for me, it's one last chance."
:iconavivah:
i knoww.
i was sitting there, talking to teh guy and thinking:
this would make a really good poem.
lmao.

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"Dying is an art, like everything else. I do it exceptionally well." -- sylvia plath
:iconluminousmoon:
it made me laugh^-^, i really liked the lines describing him

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We make for your sake such things as stand fast,
Through the ages these pages forever will last.
On blank paper the printer sets down what is heard,
Giving life to what's rife with the power of the word. -Michael Kongehl
:iconavivah:
thank you =D

--
"Dying is an art, like everything else. I do it exceptionally well." -- sylvia plath
:iconvampire-freak666:
(oh! ok, well, it's still a really good poem!)

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Pssst! I have something to tell you.......AWW CRAP! I FORGOT!
:iconavivah:
thank you =]

--
"Dying is an art, like everything else. I do it exceptionally well." -- sylvia plath

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